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DiMono

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I swear the whole thing is a gay euphemism

Not bad for a first attempt. Though I admit I'm confused at why you ride your wife face down in the poo near the end.

And the Star Trek bit caught me off-guard.

You need to work on your drawing a little, but everything else was solid. Except for riding your wife in the particular way you do here... that was kind of messed up.

abdulfaithfull1 responds:

It is my dream, if i ride my wife on a poo desert then allah bless me!
Thank you.

This is a story of great import

...and I am glad that you told it, and that you gave it the gravitas it truly deserves. Top notch all around.

zhavas responds:

:')

It's not bad, but...

you really need to compress your audio. There's no good reason for a 5 second flash to be 8.2MB. I like your cinematography, by the way.

Not bad

It's pretty okay as far as first creations go, and you clearly have some drawing talent. Now work on giving your next one a bit of a plot, and go from there.

Namaste.

It's not bad

...but 1.8MB is WAY too big for a video intro. Try to trim down the filesize a bit, where by a bit I mean a lot.

Not bad

I really like the animation style, though it could probably do with a bit of practice just to refine it a little. The pacing felt a little slow, but not by too much. Keep submitting things like this, and you shall go far.

WooleyWorld responds:

Lol, I felt the same way when I was done. I'll get better as I make more.

This is flash?

Either this wasn't done wholly in flash, or I am extremely impressed.

Meh

I agree with what's already been said. It takes far too long, and it's really, really rigid. Make more things happen at once, and give it some appropriate sound.

Hellje responds:

yeah i know now. at the moment i try it again, and now i hope i can it better

Nice collection of shorts you have here

Shorts = half cut pants.

And they're all funny, which is even better. Though the two muffins one is kind of cliche, since it's a joke everyone knows.

RhysMus responds:

funny thing about that, i never heard it, a mate told me then i thought it was origional..... oh how i fail at life!

thanks :D

Compress your audio

The animation is smooth and the video makes sense, but there really isn't a reason this should be 10MB. Compress your audio to get the filesize down, and you'll get better scores.

Deploy the... I think it's a yellow button... it's usually flashing... it makes the engines go... WHOOSH!

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