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[Invalid Love-Episode 1]

Less tween, more frame by frame animation. Get better microphones.

StudioUsagi responds:

Yeah, you're right, and I'm currently buying a legit microphone. Remember, I made this animation at age 14. If you want to see my current skill level, see my recent movie post "StickWars: Episode 1." :)

[archer]

It's hard to tell what's going on. That's a problem.

Klipus responds:

Hm I see .... thank's for the comment , I'll try to make it more clearer next time ! :)

[SpeedDrawingCastleCrasher]

First of all, it looks like he has on a diaper, and the green crap you added at the end looks like Marge Simpson's hair falling out of its bun, only green. Secondly, this is the slowest "speed drawing" I've ever seen. You are in fact aware that words mean things, and "speed" indicates that things are supposed to happen quickly, right?

Third, what's with going to your desktop and chat while recording? If you're recording yourself drawing something, then don't blow your time doing things other than drawing. That's just insulting to us as the audience.

Come back when you can actually draw something quickly, and then put it in some format that we can skip to the end of and that doesn't automatically replay. You even say in the description of the YouTube version that you're not happy with the result here, so why share it? Putting stuff like this up is just wasting everyone's time, wait until you have something you're proud of to show us.

Jimbobasaur responds:

I sped it up to the fastest possible speed with camtasia studio 7, which btw is BRILLIANT! the speed was a shocking 999% faster than the original recording, so please check it out on youtube and btw it's not a cap its green smoke which is his magic in the game :-)

[Meet Me By The Lake]

It's pretty good, but why is it 24mb?

emily-youcis responds:

Because the sound is raw whoops haha

[Sir Henry Studios Intro]

Good, but...

Everything's smooth and attractive, but it clocks in at 4MB. That's way too big for an intro, as it basically limits your flash size to 6MB rather than 10MB. I'd go with something significantly smaller if you plan to use it here.

sirhenrystudios responds:

I could have made it smaller, but I wanted the best quality possible since it was just an intro. Thanks for the feedback

[Shadow and Mallow]

Very nice

When I saw the intro I wasn't expecting much, but man did you ever deliver. Great idea, very well executed. Nicely done.

dbarnis responds:

THANK YOU SO MUCH...Yea I want a better opening, but I think it really shows the differences between them, Black and White, smooth and sharp...for being simple I think each character has their own identity and it gives personality.

THANKS AGAIN!

[Intro to Cyanide43]

You know...

Submitting it a second time probably isn't going to improve the score you get on it.

cyanide43 responds:

Did you read the comment section above?!

[Playing With Fire]

Thanks

When I read the author comments I was expecting :(

Then I watched it and I got :)

IndigenousDigitalist responds:

Thanks!

[The Bag]

Wait...

Why does it bleed?

Brewster responds:

lol i unno im just playin tennis

[What i Dream]

I swear the whole thing is a gay euphemism

Not bad for a first attempt. Though I admit I'm confused at why you ride your wife face down in the poo near the end.

And the Star Trek bit caught me off-guard.

You need to work on your drawing a little, but everything else was solid. Except for riding your wife in the particular way you do here... that was kind of messed up.

abdulfaithfull1 responds:

It is my dream, if i ride my wife on a poo desert then allah bless me!
Thank you.