DiMono's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rodney's at the door]

Not bad

You need to learn how to make it not loop at the end though.

RMtoons responds:

Thanks for the score! :D

[Enter Gia]

Your pacing is off

The words go by too fast, and the action is too slow. Also the sound is out of sync a little, as there's a point where Gia is running, jumps, but as she's in the air the sound of her running can still be heard. Also the sound from the first time through continues through the second, so the music gets really annoying over time.

The visuals are good though, so there's a lot of promise here, you're just not quite there yet. Keep at it!

ilovebigbutt2 responds:

appreciate the feedback will improve and do better. Thanks.

[Windows ZnauZ SP1 v2]

Slow it down

Give the viewer a chance to read what's on the screen. I've watched it twice and I still have no idea what's going on because I don't have time to read anything.

znauz responds:

Updated with slower speed.

[Pokemon Red/Blue Battle]

Not bad for what it is...

but there wasn't really any originality in it. Make up some funny names for their moves, make some amusing animations for when things are cast. The key to having a popular movie on here is to show us something we haven't seen before.

That said, for what it was it was pretty good. The animation was clean, the sprites were good, and it was obvious that you were doing a tribute of sorts to Pokemon. You captured the style, just need a bit of work on the substance. Keep it up!

shikkaba responds:

Yeah, I suppose I just wanted to get something out there to show what I can do for starters. I wasn't trying to be uber impressive, but maybe that's my problem?

Yeah, maybe.

Thanks for the advice.