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2010-10-19 10:12:49

Cool, I'm in it

My only criticism is that the chopper sound could have stood to be a little bit reduced when the chopper pilot was talking; made it a bit tricky to hear what that fantastic voice actor was saying.

Ragnarok: Vesper Battle

2010-09-29 02:29:38

That was rather good

I generally don't watch sprite videos all the way through, but I finished this one and was very pleased. A couple grammatical mistakes, but nothing that can't be forgiven.

Very nicely done.

The Madness Never Dies

2010-09-22 19:26:23

Um... wow

This might actually be the worst video I've ever seen which someone actually put effort into. Here are some things that need improving:

The music doesn't play. Since you say there's music, you should probably do something about that.

The dead Hank flopping around on the floor for some reason is sometimes complete, and sometimes a skull missing a face. That's no good.

There's a dude just kind of hanging in mid air on the left for no reason, serving no purpose. Try to keep the stage reserved for things that advance the story.

The sound is synced well enough, I guess, but the random scene that drops in before you shamelessly plug your website makes no sense, and the list above that scene which apparently has real writing on it is far too small to actually read.

In the end, if you want to entice people to join your website, you really need to provide a product worth watching in order to generate interest.

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