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[Tiddlywank]

IT'S OVER 9000!

I loved it.

[Enter Gia]

Your pacing is off

The words go by too fast, and the action is too slow. Also the sound is out of sync a little, as there's a point where Gia is running, jumps, but as she's in the air the sound of her running can still be heard. Also the sound from the first time through continues through the second, so the music gets really annoying over time.

The visuals are good though, so there's a lot of promise here, you're just not quite there yet. Keep at it!

ilovebigbutt2 responds:

appreciate the feedback will improve and do better. Thanks.

[Paper's edge]

Great use of multiple media

My only gripe is that the quality of your eraser was poor, and left behind shadows of what had been done before. It led to a history of what had happened, though, which ended up being artistic, so it really isn't that much of a gripe anyway. I definitely look forward to seeing more like this should you choose to do it.

[Stick Fighting Test]

Meh

Not enough time to read the dialog, and it's way too short to have that large a filesize. The animation, such as it was, was smooth, though.

[Jason, baseball and space]

Needs sound

Otherwise good.

[Who'd have thought]

Meh

This is desperately in need of music. And a replay screen.

[Windows ZnauZ SP1 v2]

Slow it down

Give the viewer a chance to read what's on the screen. I've watched it twice and I still have no idea what's going on because I don't have time to read anything.

znauz responds:

Updated with slower speed.